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22 Feb 2009, 8:26 pm

Once I knew stones that did not weep,
that dreams held dear kept best in sleep;
the words grown weary 'neath the weight
now heaped o'er stone, hearth and gate.
A debt of doubt, owed twice, unspent -
a price heavy paid for sorrows sent.
Furl now all hearts bent coarse with sorrow,
and hold brave the course against the 'morrow.

M.

[Written in 2008]

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My thanks to all the wonderful members here; I will miss the opportunity to continue to learn and work with you.

For those who seek an alternative, it is coming.

So long, and thanks for all the fish!

musicislife
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22 Feb 2009, 10:10 pm

.........wow...that's all i can say, wow.

i wish i had your talent!

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23 Feb 2009, 12:03 am

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. . .Furl now all hearts bent coarse with sorrow,
and hold brave the course against the 'morrow.

thank you, M. now I can go to work tomorrow

M.

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Alis volat propriis
State Motto of Oregon

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23 Feb 2009, 3:40 am

*blushstammer* Thank you, both of you... that odd chasm between desire and fear when it comes to feedback, it eats at me. Often I think I may be an era off when it comes to my writing style, but then again - I've always been a cutting edge anachronism...

M.

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