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Batz
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08 Apr 2009, 4:01 pm

I wrote a personal narrative for my portfolio. the portfolio is at school ready to be shipped to Frankfort, Kentucky, but I have a copy of the final draft and posted it on the web for you to see. Click on this website to read my personal narrative:

Betting World-- a Personal Narrative

Tell me what you guys think. Any thoughts are appreciated.



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09 Apr 2009, 6:16 pm

Okay, any comments? Anyone?



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09 Apr 2009, 11:19 pm

Hi Batz. I read some of it, not all of it. It's good. :)


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