OP, your post doesn't look particularly sexist or insensitive, but well nevertheless it is. At least maybe you could phrase it better? If you want, we can discuss if women really are so much more illogical than men? How do you think, maybe women find men just as illogical?
Also, as one of your basic bullet points, I would add "proper behavior", meaning that besides having a job, car and being attractive, one also has to know how to behave, how to be sensitive, not to judge people and be more understanding, be more respective, and basically be a better, more wiser human being. Trust me, chicks dig that, and I mean if you really make that change for yourself, and not just be the "nice guy" who does that only to impress girls.