Geekonychus wrote:
You're off to a good start:
I'd delete
"I'm not going to lie I have never had a girlfriend before, but I am not desperate for one."
"I have a very dark past full of a lot of abuse from peers and family."
Although it's honest, a girl is going look at that and think "baggage" before she even gets to know you. I'd also try and come up with a few jokes to replace some of the generic answers in "you should message me if" and "I spend a lot of time thinking about."
I must somehow have skipped those parts or something, but now that you mentioned it - Yes those should def be deleted