astaut wrote:
I looked at it, but I'm afraid I don't really have advice for you. I don't see anything that stands out (in a bad way). You did spell "height" wrong in one place. Some people probably wouldn't notice, but some (like me) will get hung up on that
That's something I would notice on someone else's, I can't believe I missed it on mine!
Thank you for pointing that out, it's now corrected. I've just read my bump again and that's quite littered with mistakes too.
I have been drowning out valentines though so have intoxication to blame there!