The forest (poem) comment please ^_^

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THE FOREST



the life giving soil, the lime green leaves,
the soft velvet stream flowing,
the birds singing, darting through the air,
the deer elegently walking,
the morning dew on a spiders web,
the sweet, pungent air,
im smiling, enlightened.
The balance, the ambience, i feel one.

the beauty of this place, smooth, flowing,
the clouds drifting in the air,
the sweet taste of blackberries.
the bluebells swaying in the wind,
The wind speaks a thousand words.

the swooping dragonflies, landing on my shoulder.
I am the trees, i feel i belong.
here in the forest, the robins song.
I cry, the beauty is to much!
I love the forest, the place of life,
The bounties of nature, i close my eyes,
and think of my life.
It doesnt matter here, the woods, the forest. The... Sanctuary.

Great poem. Watch your spelling and capitalization but that is not all that important.

Must have missed this...

I liked it!

I felt the wording did a good job of 'painting' pictures for me while I was reading it.

I'm no writing critic, but I really did like what I read.

Keep it up!