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aspergian_mutant
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28 May 2008, 11:14 pm

Hush O child O mine,
A great greyness befalls our human race,
In the twilight of our dreams our hearts desires brings our fall,
but there in you O child O mine, Lies the hopes of our kind,
I sing of our joys and loves and hopes in you,
as dusk is drawn with a sad sweet tune,
I sing of joys and loves to you,
as hope springs forth from your own shining heart light,
bringing a new dawn to our own fallen souls.
I sing of our hopes and dreams of you.
as you dream your own dreams of tomorrows bright and true.
So Hush O child O mine,
for each generation is our hopes in you,
evil from the grave, will come,
as your own child will bring you hopes and a new dream,
of a dawn in you, as you sing to him of hopes joys and loves, in you.



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02 Jun 2008, 9:23 pm

Fantastic do you have any of these published yet?


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02 Jun 2008, 10:46 pm

no, just here on this forum, although I have many on my computer filed away.



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02 Jun 2008, 11:43 pm

I love it man, very deep and true. We all hope the next generation of our own kids to be better than our own, to strive forward with a brighter future and better sense of understanding. The cycle only repeats itself until the end of time and makes our own existence feel like it has meaning.