AbominableSnoCone wrote:
Anybody have experience writing cover letters for job application? Ideas on where to start? I'm pretty clueless and new at this. I think my resume is alright, but last time I didn't get any of the internships I wanted until I got special help from my school's career center... But I want to send a few applications out before I get back to school which means I don't really have access to that.
So, who's good at this?
I don't know if I'm what you'd call good at it, but I manage to get call backs (even if I blow the interview). Give it a shot and, if its possible (as a mod, you would know better than I) PM your cover letter to me and I'll critique it. If PM'ing it won't work let me know and I'll give you my e-mail.
Edit: Here's an old one I found. It got a call back and they were interested, but decided I lived too far away.
Dear Ms. Ash,
Please accept my attached resume for consideration regarding your current need for a manufacturing technician.
My formal training is in Biomedical Equipment and I have Almost 15 years experience repairing and troubleshooting a wide variety of computer-controlled equipment. My most recent position has been repairing kidney dialysis machines and the related water purification systems. These machines use computer-controlled pumps and valves to mix 3 different chemicals and deliver that combination to the patient at a precise flow, temperature, and pressure. Feedback is typically provided by a variety of sensors including resistive pressure, infrared, ultrasonic and Hall effect.
These experiences, as well as my background in computer networking, welding and machining, enable me to troubleshoot and repair many different types of equipment in a wide variety of settings.
While my work in the medical field has been challenging and rewarding, I am now exploring other directions for my career and would welcome the chance to further discuss this opportunity.
Sincerely,
06xrs
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