A song I wrote.

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Just a little song I wrote. It is about how I felt when i was taken on an Adventure Trip with my class and it was...terrifying... Here it is:

VERSE 1:
They say the whole world falls apart
When misfortune is a dagger in your heart
But I don't really care if the world isn't there anymore
Anymore

CHORUS:
I'm afraid, I'm alone
Got no place to call home
I'm disturbed, I'm freaked out
Someone please get me out
I'm not used to this pain
My tears are lost in the rain

VERSE 2:
No words will ever tell the tale
Of how I felt like I was living in a jail
But alas, I can't say. I won't have to, it's okay. No it's not
No it's not!

CHORUS:
I'm afraid, I'm alone
Got no place to call home
I'm disturbed, I'm freaked out
Someone please get me out
I'm not used to this pain
My tears are lost in the rain

BRIDGE:
What they say, isn't true
I will not see it through
They keep saying I will
But I won't last until
Just threw me to the dogs
Can't see nothin' but fog
But I don't wanna die
But I don't wanna die

CHORUS:
I'm afraid, I'm alone
Got no place to call home
I'm disturbed, I'm freaked out
Someone please get me out
I'm not used to this pain
My tears are lost in the rain

BACKING VOCALS:
Don't back out, you will get through this
Once you're done, you will have true bliss.

(Ech. Now I'm depressed. X( Oh well XD. Whaddaya think?)

Very nice!

sounds like you've got creativity inside you. i write poems like that all the time when i'm sad...do you write poetry often?

I don't really write poetry that often, but these days is an exception, because I am working on and organizing songs so that I can make an album! ^_^

I made a weird little album when I approxiametly 6.5 years old called "Rusty's Mingle Bingle". XD