Is this poem any good? Please answer?

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I stand here terrified and hopeless 
Driven by my lust 
By what I cannot have but imagine having anyway 
Searching for the eternal 
But finding only falsity 
I search, and strive for pleasure that satisfies 
But everyone of these girls is the same 
And they all would never want me 
For the majority of the world is taken by other charming gentlemen 
For I am outnumbered 
Then why does it seem like I will have no one 
Perhaps I am worse, and this shatters my ego 
I want a wife but am tortured by uncertainty 
For lust never waits 
It only pursues, one way or another 
And obscures the ability to think rationally 
Yet even pleasure by hand is forbidden by God 
God, that's it! I'll fast! 
For if it is done in the name of the all-powerful unseen 
There is no reason to do anything but strive towards the divine 
And it will develop my discipline
i turn to God once more and seek his guidance 
Al-Fatiha (In Islam when you say this you recite the Al-Fatiha chapter of the Qur'an). 
Now the only matter is whether my free will chooses God, and myself, or nafs (inner pleasure seeking drive) and my enemy within