Kuraudo777 wrote:
I'm actually trying not to focus too much on dialogue, and let the character express who they are by their actions, not by what they say. Tolkien had a similar problem, as he seemed to like describing things instead.
Perhaps you should think about being a screenwriter, if you haven't already considered it already. What you described is my idea type of film. It's not that I think films have to be totally free of dialogue, just not be too dialogue heavy. I don't like it when the characters spend too much time on exposition instead of just showing it. After all, film is a visual medium but nowadays a lot of films are just shots of talking heads. That sort of story is better suited for a novel but it gets into films.
I find it especially satisfying in film when they quickly and subtly show something unknown the characters, rather than having the characters point it out in dialogue, which requires at least one of them to know about it. After all, in a story, a plot point may be the hero doesn't yet know all the facts or doesn't yet know of the villain's deception. Better to show that rather than explain it as some films do.
That way you avoid having awkward scenarios like Goldfinger needlessly explaining his entire plan to Bond just before he attempts to kill him. No villain would explain his scheme to a condemned man. You may be good at writing films with only a small amount of dialogue, similar to A Fistfull of Dollars, 2001: A Space Odyssey and Wall-E
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