Any tips for someone trying to write a book...

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Ok, so I'm trying to write a book, I've completed part 3 and most of part 4. but if theres anyone on here who knows more about writeing books, I have some questions...

how long should a chapter or part be? My "chapters" are called parts, the number of pages in each one varies, but most are around 4 to 5 computer paper pages. (have not printed anything out yet)
what's the best way to create dialog? I use the " symbols for when people speak. "Example"
How big should the letters be? I always use somewhat larger scale when typeing so it's easyier to see the words.
Any other tips someone could give me?
I'm writing the second story before the first... becuase I just have the ideas right for the second one.

also, is it really so wierd for a 20 year old guy, to write a story were most of the the characters are female, ages 18 and older? (I started writing several years ago, but only recently got things to work right for me) The characters go to an Academy that is for girls only, so thats why they are all female. The first story had male characters as well, but the second story does not and is about a girl and her best friend.

the second story has a character who is named "Lilith" I thought it would add a form of mystery too the story, So it's kinda hard to explain with out reading what I am writing.

there are also characters who may possibly be lovers, yet they are both female. it's a thing that one of them denies. but both are teased for.
So, theres way to much to include in this post. just looking for tips on how to properally write a decent book.

I notice that, even in your post, you make numerous grammatical errors. If these exist in your writing it will be rejected by literary magazines or publishers. The rules of grammar, therefore, are absolutely necessary to help you progress. There are many rules but the link I have posted below is a start.

11 Essential Rules of Grammar

It takes a lot of practice. A first attempt probably won’t go far, but would be a learning experience.

Post your story somewhere, some blogging place, then give us a link in this thread. I’m sure there’s tons of places where
you can do that. Just be sure to pick a format that doesn’t makes the visitor sign in. That would certainly drive me away.

I started looking around in this “Art, Writing, and Music” forum for what others have done,
but you can do that as well as I can.

Writing can be good therapy for you, even if you never get published.

I saw some advice years ago that said to read everything they can by great and successful writers. Unless you are truly a magnificent literary genius, to be successful, you have to learn what is expected of your writing by those who set the standards.

Okay. Let's have a look at this post -

what kinds of errors have you noticed? whichever the case, my book does not have too many errors as I have looked it over several times. And, I have had sections of it read by a very trustworthy freind, he reads alot of books and knows how they work quite well. So, it shouldn't have any serious errors if a guy who loves books and knows them well thinks it's good.

1. Beginning of sentences have to be capitalized. "what" wasn't as well as "whichever."
2. "Friend" is the correct spelling, not freind.
3. Typically, you don't begin sentences with a conjunction ("And") unless you understand why it's being placed there.
4. The sentence "he reads..." begins a new idea and it should have started as its own sentence, not followed with a comma like you did.
5. "alot" is not a word. It's "a lot." Other common mistakes people make include "your" for "you're" and "you're" for "your."
6. The sentence "So, it shouldn't..." actually continues the idea before it so it didn't need to begin as a new sentence.

I chose to look at this post, BTW, because your first post would've taken me all night to correct. Please, the rules of grammar are your friend. You asked for help and I can help.

Thanks for clearing that up. That said, I'd still like to take a look at your writing. (Yes, I'm a skeptic).

Ok, I'm just starting out with this... But I plan to post some of my work on here, such as writeing storys and stuff...

See what I mean? "writeing" is spelled "writing" and "storys" is spelled "stories." These are rudimentary errors. For people to take your blog seriously, if that's what you want, it should read something like:

Ok. I'm just starting out with this but I plan to post some of my work here such as writing and stuff.