Rap song I wrote. What do you think?

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZCXH5WXIkY

The song is called Delusion. Apologies for some of the rap parts, my words got a touch mixed up. Anyway, would love to hear your thoughts.

Well, I quite like it, though the lyrics are at points difficult to decipher. Also, you don't have a bad singing voice. This is unconventional rap. I like that you're playing the guitar while rapping. Who are your influences?

Michael Jackson meets Wonderwall.

I like it; could easily be sat listening to that in a decent small music venue. Good stuff.