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fibonaccispiral777
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21 Oct 2013, 10:37 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5Ih3AkDusw

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22 Oct 2013, 10:56 pm

I really liked the melody and thought that if you simplified it over the verses, and in between you played the more intricate version, that would tidy things up a bit. When you hit the guitar for the beat, that takes away from the melody I thought. I used to be a drummer so you don't have to listen to me lol


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