My first blog post ever. Not sure about it. Feedback pls.

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I'm not much of a poet, but my first post sort of came out a bit poem like...

I need a pic or something for the banner or change my theme. I'm so ignorant on blogs and webpages and things like finding a pic bahahaha.

If someone looked at it and gave me some ideas or constructive feedback, or thoughts on my words...for discussion-I'm open to hearing please You will be the first to see. I won't even share with my spouse or family-feels so.....personal.

Anyhow, I hope you will take a read. If I can get a link to work I guess bahahaha.

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Synesthesia? You convey something. Work on it some more and it'll read like a poem. But it's your expression - be true to yourself!

Wow, emandeli, you have an excellent first blog entry there. Beautifully written, if you ask me; you've agreat way with putting down your feelings in words. I think for an introductive post, it works very well.

Good call on picking the 'Chateau' theme, too. It's very easy on the eyes, isn't it? And it has a reader-friendly lay-out.

Do you have anything planned for the overall theme of your blog, or do you have any follow-up posts planned already? I'm curious about where you're going to take this.

I don't think you need to do anything to 'fix' this first entry, it's great just the way it is right now. I guess all you have to do is write up your 'About' page, and then find a banner that is to your liking and pertains to the themes of your blog.

Best wishes!

Thank you, for giving me this. I have been very down, and feeling very alone. What you wrote is beautiful and gives me comfort. Thank you.

I loved it. I've reblogged it on wordpress on my blog if you don't mind.

It really makes me feel grateful that you took the time to look, or post something here, or even shared some ideas on improvement, or what Waterfalls wrote...feeling alone I reread my first post and it is pretty scattered thoughts and all over the place but I think it sort of is alike to who I am in real life as well....on the outside.

Really love to see your blog posts, poems, ramblings, and pages as well. I am new to how to follow all but trying to figure it all out. Any neat sites you follow as well?

Have a couple new "my head" posts in case anyone wants to read.

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