Do you like this poem?

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26 Apr 2014, 6:10 am

I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.
I will pass the apple sauce next time I'm asked.

, Sir.

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26 Apr 2014, 7:37 am

I give up.

What's the joke here?

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27 Apr 2014, 5:39 pm

I might like it if I had any idea what it meant.

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27 Apr 2014, 6:28 pm

IrishJew wrote:

This poem evokes the hopelessness and despair felt by a lonely child under the weight of an overbearing father's demands. Truly a heart wrenching piece.

Actually, I have no idea what it's about. Could you tell us. And please pass applesauce while you're at it.

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27 Apr 2014, 6:31 pm

It seems like plagiarism, but from Simpson's or Mother Goose? :chin:

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27 Apr 2014, 6:38 pm

MjrMajorMajor wrote:

It seems like plagiarism, but from Simpson's or Mother Goose? :chin:

You look like the good witch from Wizard of Oz. If she was on ecstasy and crack at the same time.

*Edit* OMG sorry, I thought this was the say something rude thread.

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27 Apr 2014, 6:42 pm

Rascal77s wrote:

MjrMajorMajor wrote:

It seems like plagiarism, but from Simpson's or Mother Goose? :chin:

You look like the good witch from Wizard of Oz. If she was on ecstasy and crack at the same time.

*Edit* OMG sorry, I thought this was the say something rude thread.

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28 Apr 2014, 7:10 am

IrishJew wrote:

I think this is a horrible poem ,
not because of it's poetic failings
but because of the intrinsic military rapist imagery
the truly desperate despair and helplessness conveyed.

IrishJew, I can only hope helplessly and hopelessly that this is not a personal experience?

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28 Apr 2014, 8:49 am

All these are correct interpretations.

Actually, the whole thing is a joke.

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