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27 Feb 2007, 11:28 am
27 Feb 2007, 2:23 pm
27 Feb 2007, 10:55 pm
E7ernal wrote:
The deepest reaches of my mind,
Subconcious thoughts of suicide,
Car crashes and cyanide,
BANG!
Smoke rises, I fall on to my side.
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Something I put together in my mind on the journey to school.
I still can't think of how to end it though
EDIT: Thanks to skafather84 for the inspiration for the ending
Subconcious thoughts of suicide,
Car crashes and cyanide,
BANG!
Smoke rises, I fall on to my side.
-----------------------------------------------------------------
Something I put together in my mind on the journey to school.
I still can't think of how to end it though
EDIT: Thanks to skafather84 for the inspiration for the ending
much love, i like it (and liked it before my suggestion, too
).
