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fibonaccispiral777
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02 Sep 2014, 11:14 am

This is an open mic night I did recently playing a song wrote called Freedom. If you would like to listen to it, there is a link to it on youtube-

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fc3son7c2c

I had never played with the band before so it was just improvisation hence why the dynamics do not work at times. I was also pretty nervous and had a lot of anxiety before I went on so that might have hindered the performance slightly. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy :) Please share it, if you like it!



nerdygirl
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02 Sep 2014, 12:07 pm

l like it!

Your song has good structure and is catchy. You are also quite good on guitar. You are also quite expressive in your singing.

I like the edgy acoustic rock. My husband also has written some songs in that style.

Good job!