What I wrote so far for Let It Unfold. Ideas written down too. Opinions?
Clean Verse:
I walk alone this way
You may come back some day
I missed the compassion
But you got problems
I am right here
Thrash – Pre-chorus:
Your judgment is blurred
By injustice of the people
I am an example
You will follow
Good luck
Escaping from cardboard cut outs
Of the people that you wanted
I know your aspiration damn well
Chorus:
I have not gave up yet
I know that my feet are
set in the ground
I can step away and
Give you a piece of heart
I’ll let your life unfold
I’m sorry if I came off
Like I told you what to do
My anger is for your surroundings
Not you
Verse 2:
Your friends will turn on you
I leave my foot behind
I will be your last hope
As you have nothing else to say to the plague
Thrash – Pre-Chorus:
Your judgment is blurred
So my mouth will be shut
As I stand among you
I will let your life unfold