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Do you like my poem?
Yes 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
No 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Maybe 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 4

queensamaria
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20 Dec 2014, 6:06 pm

I feel like these emotions had done something

These emotions were split in two

The left side is positive

The right side is negative

One minute, I feel like a grownup

The next, I acted like a child

The left side is intelligent

The right side is idiotic

It is very hard working

It is lazy

It is happy and involved

It is depressing and distant

Somehow

I feel like my emotions are torn

Torn between the angst and the warm-hearted

I don't know what I should do

I was just a doll


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queensamaria
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09 Feb 2015, 5:36 pm

I just to tell how sorry I am for my poem. I understand if it's lacking of emotions, but it's because I felt a bit self-discovered. Please forgive me.


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17 Feb 2015, 9:13 pm

I am really sorry for my earlier poem. It was lacking of emotions, period. Please forgive me.


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