I only wish she could read my poetry.

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Her

Endless times I've dreamt of you and I,
Conceived every possible situation together,
The feelings I feel are not felt in return,
Hopefully things will one day get better,

I see your face in everything I do,
I dream things I know will never be true,
Yet still I suffer through this fragile dream,
I adore your body so beautiful and lean,

How can I make my hopes come true,
Hopes of loving and being with you,
The truth remains a mystery to me,
I only see things as I want them to be,

Oh so graceful Oh so young,
When I'm around her I want to melt,
I'm living through death longing for her touch,
Oh when will I break out of this bittersweet spell,

The more I write the more I feel,
The more I realize these feelings are real,
The more I feel hopelessness and despair,
In the confusing dark I whisper a prayer,

If only there existed some sort of way,
For her to love me in the same way,
Away she walks out of my sight,
I'll cry myself to sleep tonight,

For so many years I've longed for love,
But such a thing in this world is rare,
Send me this gift from the heavens above,
I'm cold, I'm lonely, I feel despair.

That was beautiful. I wish more guys expressed themselves more outwardly like that about their ladies.

That's ashame you can't show that to her. Some girls luv to hear something like that from honesty.

No. They don't.

- D

Bumped for truth.

I agree. I really like the poem, tho.

OK, forget what I said.

Sorry, but women hate sissies. Poems are a MUST NOT, unless you're married.

Funny for this to come from a girl and to hear women hate sissies from a guy!
Oh, and I'm not married, I'm single.

2 penises and 1 vagina against your single vagina.

The verdict is in, women hate weakness and poetry is weakness.

Shouldn't that kind of talk be in the adult discussions?

I will say no more in this thread after stating an opinion and then getting attacked for it.

Last edited by MissConstrue on 08 Apr 2008, 12:05 am, edited 1 time in total.

Penis and vagina are strictly PC terms, thank you. Even the most extreme of prudes will have to deal with it.

And to add, I die a little each time I have to censor myself and refer to those terms.

NO, you're just immature that's all. All you did was attack me for an opinion in the nastiest way you could. You might as well be a troll.

Bye.

Yay for the internet. Yay for text. Attack?

Silly, I like you...I would never. I'm just in a "mood." Please don't misunderstand.

(Lack of emoticons 4tw)

Poetry isn't weakness, it takes a lot of effort for someone to not only show their deepest feelings, but also to present them so artfully.
And yes, I also find it funny how men know what women think, but we don't.

I know it's not weakness, it's strength at it's utmost form. Yet, women often(in my experience, and I don't seem alone) tend to disagree. They, in my eyes, see it as an act of desperation and are put off by it. You have to form a connection with a person before you can devote such "art" to them.

[quote="Bluesummers
And to add, I die a little each time I have to censor myself and refer to those terms. [/quote]


same here & more, plus:
there's a lot of linguistic sensory issues as well, aren't there?