Respect!! !
Sounds like your taste in ambience and mood is dead-aim (a little bit of errieness in there as well - I'm all about that), my only thought is you may wanna keep singing, and I mean like a few hours a day. The top track sounds like your voice is getting in shape, the second down sounded like you were straining a bit. When you can make it sound completely effortless you'll really have something going on there.
BTW, if you ever want me to make some beats or do some remixes, just for kicks (I'm bored and wouldn't mind doing something different) let me know.
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