i wrote this today random thing it was good feeling though so i wonderd if anyone would like to give their opinion? its a bit personal i supose but hey were all freinds here. lol positve and negative will be apprecicated as always!! or even suggestions.
Heavy air chains me so,
my untrailed sentence to be served
Way down passed all that lived or breathed,
suns holy power does not reache.
Clock feels no bounds nor burden,
no regards to my own cessation,
just tick and tock
Within my mind a single thought glides,
from who? is it that i must hide
for there is no such other oppressing, me for any,
other resons to stand tall and true,
many yet cant follow through.
springing out my soul now, tears flow warm and wet,
Comfort is despairs best friend, though i doubt weve ever met.
