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20 Apr 2009, 10:45 pm

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ugma-N0wElI[/youtube]

anyone liked this poem?

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20 Apr 2009, 10:53 pm

i liked it, :jester:

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20 Apr 2009, 10:55 pm

nice! i'm glad to know that someone besides me enjoyed this poem.

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20 Apr 2009, 10:56 pm

I'm afraid I don't like it, because it's directly about his feelings. I don't feel, hearing it, that he expressed anything in a new or novel way. It just seemed like an undisciplined rant.

I thought that I might like it better if it was written down, but I've read it and I'm still not fond. I don't really, "get," poetry if it is so undisciplined, I'm afraid.

EDIT: I hope this doesn't seem like I'm being negative for the sake of it, I'm just saying what I think about it.

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20 Apr 2009, 11:03 pm

McTell wrote:

Wow, what an interesting reply! It's totally fine not to respond to a poem.

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21 Apr 2009, 1:27 pm

In responce to the title of this forum: "I don't drink, fight or screw" ..

You'd be LONELY in my country! Lol. Your forum would have needed to be on another website altogether...

"www.lonelyplanet.net" :twisted:

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21 Apr 2009, 3:53 pm

then what do ya, do ya do?

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21 Apr 2009, 3:59 pm

digger1 wrote:

then what do ya, do ya do?

Goody two, goody two, goody goody two shoes
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Hell's teeth, if I've got the wrong song I'll seem even more warped than usual

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22 Apr 2009, 8:22 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol:
Again,I am slayer of thread.

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22 Apr 2009, 9:53 pm

Ligea_Seroua wrote:

:lol:

Again,I am slayer of thread.

no you are not.

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23 Apr 2009, 4:52 pm

Aww, Learning2Survive, you are so kind, we should clone you! :lol:

And to return to topic, I prefer the poem Baptism by Anis Mogjani

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23 Apr 2009, 7:23 pm

hehe, I bet Anis Mojgani gets "Baptized" a lot if you know what I mean.

For anyone if they are reading this here is Baptism.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HrXLIEoLDuw[/youtube]

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